Oekaki
by Lil_Barbie

September 11, 2010

First pix any advice?
Lil_Barbie
Very nice. The only thing I can say constructively is that the skirt looks stiff.
Try "curling" the sides of it. And the shading on it shouldn't "bend" like that; it should be straighter.
Rose Mouse
ok how about this?
Lil_Barbie
You've got one extra pixel on the right side, but that's great otherwise.
Rose Mouse