Please don't double post the same things. The dresses have a very odd shape and the shading isn't dark enough. The lollipop outline looks like its just black. Try using a dark shade of the base color for the outlines like you did with your dresses. The rainbow shirt looks like it has black outlines and also darken the shading. The shape of the right sleeve looks deformed too. And finally the yellow shirt doesn't have dark enough shading and you should probably take out the buttons and pockets because it looks weird ;/. Please fix and resubmit!
June 26, 2014 9:43 (9 years ago)
Resubmitting one item :
Rainbow Shirt
June 26, 2014 12:19 (9 years ago)
Hey chup, why not start with something really simple like a short sleeveless dress or a sleeveless top, it's a lot easier to do than big gowns and big sleeved tops. Cc has good points too, the shading should be darker and same with the outlines, if it helps you can look at some of the items on the site as a reference just to see how the color differences and shapes work.
June 26, 2014 12:22 (9 years ago)
@Tiffany_may I am absolutely loving your stuff! Those prom dresses have an absolutely gorgeous design! ^_^
June 27, 2014 9:41 (9 years ago)
Resubmitting one item ^_^
Rainbow Shirt
June 27, 2014 9:53 (9 years ago)
@Kawaii Chup-chup your shading has too many colors, it needs to be a lot simpler. Try using one or two colours to shade.
June 27, 2014 23:19 (9 years ago)
Resubmitting one item ^_^
Rainbow Shirt
June 27, 2014 23:35 (9 years ago)
a bit darker for each shade?
June 28, 2014 1:27 (9 years ago)
Finished darken the shades :D
June 28, 2014 7:52 (9 years ago)
Did anyone noticed my prom dresses TTT^TTT...
...Artists notice me!!! XD
*I submitted before Kawaii Chup-Chup on June 16.
June 28, 2014 11:00 (9 years ago)
I noticed them tiffany, they are absolutely gorgeous<3333
June 29, 2014 1:25 (9 years ago)
Kawaii don't forget to shade the side of the body not just the sleeves :3
the bottom of the short shouldn't be a straight line either it should move down a little bit to show that our bodies aren't flat ^^
June 29, 2014 2:17 (9 years ago)
Done shading and adjusting the lines :D
June 29, 2014 15:57 (9 years ago)
the line art is much better! ^^ the shading on the body could still be a bit darker but at this point I'd like to see you work on some different pieces. ^^
July 1, 2014 7:07 (9 years ago)
Thanks!!!! Your advice helped me a lot!!! ^^
Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^
July 1, 2014 7:12 (9 years ago)
Ok!! Here you go!! ^_^
Done adjusting the shades!
July 6, 2014 1:41 (9 years ago)
For the my artist test given by Alina:
July 6, 2014 1:54 (9 years ago)
Here.
Done re-adjusting the shadings ^^
July 7, 2014 1:49 (9 years ago)
Tiffany: Mesh is one thing I find to be SUPER hard, but I like the job that you have done with the reference picture you were given.
I will not hold the ugly colors against you XD ;P
I also did like your prom dresses, I saw them days ago... but I don't open my mouth much here. lol
July 7, 2014 15:31 (9 years ago)
Congrats Tiffany_May is now an artist! ^w^
July 7, 2014 17:42 (9 years ago)
Congratulations Tiffany! <3
July 8, 2014 0:09 (9 years ago)
Congrats~! ㅎㅅㅎ
July 8, 2014 11:32 (9 years ago)
Submitting one item : Shoes
July 8, 2014 12:30 (9 years ago)
Submitting 2 items for today:
1. Shoes(Purple)
2. Shoes(Blue)
^_^
July 8, 2014 13:41 (9 years ago)
they could be shaped a bit better but the shading is alright, maybe a bit too shiny XD but I don't mind that for shoes tbh ^^
July 9, 2014 10:17 (9 years ago)
Thanks. ^_^
July 9, 2014 10:22 (9 years ago)
I'll try to work on it's shape and Resubmit it ASAP!!! :D
July 9, 2014 10:35 (9 years ago)
Resubmitting two items :
1. Shoes(Purple)
2.Shoes(Blue)
July 11, 2014 12:55 (9 years ago)
Resubmitting three items :
1. Shoes(Purple)
2. Shoes(Blue)
3.Rainbow Shirt
July 11, 2014 15:15 (9 years ago)
If you are going to try to make items I suggest keeping your old files after you fix them, so we can see if you are making the correct progress.
It's hard to tell you things when each time you've posted the items they all look the same.
Also you don't need to spam them either. I don't need to see it THAT many times when it looks the same as before.
That being said, you still need to work on the shape of the shoes, they look way too big and Alina going to have to continue to guide you on that shirt.
July 13, 2014 1:51 (9 years ago)
Oops i'm so sorry xD
August 22, 2014 6:58 (9 years ago)
Paint Splatter (Pink)
August 22, 2014 7:21 (9 years ago)
Fixed the shading
August 22, 2014 9:08 (9 years ago)
Second submission
Mochi Fever (Background)
August 22, 2014 9:58 (9 years ago)
so here's my final and fixed submissions for today.............I made mistake s on the other submissions so I'm sorry if this submission is repeated. Just ignore the first three submissions >_< they're my biggest epic fails..............
So here is it! The final one. No more repetitions, I promise
Backgrounds :
1. Paint Splatter (Pink)
2. Mochi Fever
August 23, 2014 14:20 (9 years ago)
Ah, I can see you're improving, keep it up! ^^
August 24, 2014 1:43 (9 years ago)
Thanks!!! I'm also practicing every weekends so I can improve my pixel arts. ^_^
August 24, 2014 11:42 (9 years ago)
Are there any things I should fix/improve with my two backgorunds? ^_^
August 25, 2014 6:46 (9 years ago)
There is always room for improvement, but I think you should work on clothing. We are a little more lenient on backgrounds so working on clothing would probably help you become an artist faster :D. Keep up the good work!
August 25, 2014 7:44 (9 years ago)
Thank you thank you!!! I'll try to work on the clothing next :D
August 25, 2014 10:01 (9 years ago)
Here's a dress ^_^
1. Rosy Ball Gown (With a little texture)
August 25, 2014 11:27 (9 years ago)
I'm sorry I submitted the dress using .GIF format and it has a little black dot near the right shoulder.
So I'm resubmitting it again now with a .PNG format and I removed that crazy little dot there. :P
Here's the FIXED dress ^_^
1. Rosy Ball Gown
August 25, 2014 12:54 (9 years ago)
And for shoes
1. Charm (Pink/Yellow/Blue)
August 27, 2014 3:20 (9 years ago)
Submission/s
1.Rosie Prom Dress
August 27, 2014 8:05 (9 years ago)
submission 2
1.Rosie Dance and Prom Dress
(Second design of Rosie Prom Dress)
August 27, 2014 12:06 (9 years ago)
I know the site is slow but try not too post too many times in a row, will you?
August 27, 2014 17:36 (9 years ago)
@kawaii oh I love that second design of your rose prom dress, the skirt folds are brilliant! My advice would be to try and dull your outline so they're not dark hot pink, and the darken them, just so they look like outlines more.
Also maybe add a bit of detail to the bodice? But it's an improvement to your other works, so well done!
August 28, 2014 9:09 (9 years ago)
Thanks! I'll just change the outline color and I'll just add more details to the bodice ^_^
August 28, 2014 9:11 (9 years ago)
Oopps I'm sorry Karin ^_^
I'll try to post less next time or post all of them together :P
I was just TOO excited lol. xDDDD
August 30, 2014 15:37 (9 years ago)
Done editing the Rosie Dance and Prom Dress ^_^
September 1, 2014 11:39 (9 years ago)
The outline looks better, maybe lighten the belt outline, it doesn't need to be as dark as the outer outline.
You should try to make different stuff to broaden your range, like maybe a skirt or top? Maybe try to add some more details to them?
Rainbow Shirt
Rainbow Shirt
Rainbow Shirt
...Artists notice me!!! XD
*I submitted before Kawaii Chup-Chup on June 16.
the bottom of the short shouldn't be a straight line either it should move down a little bit to show that our bodies aren't flat ^^
Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^
Done adjusting the shades!
Done re-adjusting the shadings ^^
I will not hold the ugly colors against you XD ;P
I also did like your prom dresses, I saw them days ago... but I don't open my mouth much here. lol
1. Shoes(Purple)
2. Shoes(Blue)
^_^
1. Shoes(Purple)
2.Shoes(Blue)
1. Shoes(Purple)
2. Shoes(Blue)
3.Rainbow Shirt
It's hard to tell you things when each time you've posted the items they all look the same.
Also you don't need to spam them either. I don't need to see it THAT many times when it looks the same as before.
That being said, you still need to work on the shape of the shoes, they look way too big and Alina going to have to continue to guide you on that shirt.
Mochi Fever (Background)
So here is it! The final one. No more repetitions, I promise
Backgrounds :
1. Paint Splatter (Pink)
2. Mochi Fever
1. Rosy Ball Gown (With a little texture)
So I'm resubmitting it again now with a .PNG format and I removed that crazy little dot there. :P
Here's the FIXED dress ^_^
1. Rosy Ball Gown
1. Charm (Pink/Yellow/Blue)
1.Rosie Prom Dress
1.Rosie Dance and Prom Dress
(Second design of Rosie Prom Dress)
Also maybe add a bit of detail to the bodice? But it's an improvement to your other works, so well done!
I'll try to post less next time or post all of them together :P
I was just TOO excited lol. xDDDD
You should try to make different stuff to broaden your range, like maybe a skirt or top? Maybe try to add some more details to them?