And a mini tv too. comment please.(to : Thank you. You're very nice.)
My thing to submit:
August 18, 2012 14:19 (12 years ago)
@samsamsierra: i luv the Set of Fire Feather(all) you've made and the mini tv looks adorable but i don't understand the "stick"'s purpose for..
August 18, 2012 21:18 (12 years ago)
Good deal Tiffany. Like I said, I liked them, but they need to be better.
August 19, 2012 1:44 (12 years ago)
The back of the tv is a car's side mirror...
August 19, 2012 1:45 (12 years ago)
But i'll try to improve it..
August 19, 2012 6:51 (12 years ago)
Super another submission. comment please...
August 19, 2012 8:02 (12 years ago)
Another version of the mini tv. It has a wooden memo.
August 19, 2012 8:04 (12 years ago)
Her it is. Comment please.
August 20, 2012 11:31 (12 years ago)
Fairly Hair
Ribboned Dress
Plain Dress
Emoticon Necklaces
August 20, 2012 23:07 (12 years ago)
omggggg I love the ribbon dresses! Cant wait to see how many colors you would do it in :D
August 21, 2012 0:38 (12 years ago)
Wow! Nice creations! I love it!
August 21, 2012 1:51 (12 years ago)
I really like the plain and ribbon'd dresses. If they do get accepted, might you consider make a black ribbon one? I think it would look quite nice. ^^
August 21, 2012 14:00 (12 years ago)
oh my gosh I love your creations there very unique :3
I love them :)
August 22, 2012 4:36 (12 years ago)
Ugh tired Im gonna make a whole stack full of pixels tonight so lol yes here is one >3> [img]http://i46.tinypic.com/2621tom_th.png[img]
Meh idk what to put on this one O3O I LOVE THE COLORS SO VERY MUCH
August 22, 2012 6:37 (12 years ago)
I have no idea how to make hats o.O I need help :O it is currently 11:37 at night and I think i will make two more items {Maybe}
August 22, 2012 6:52 (12 years ago)
*w* I am deeply in love with this color.
August 23, 2012 11:52 (12 years ago)
I'll submit this dress. I call it Purple. Comment please. I'll improve it if there's something wrong.
August 23, 2012 12:42 (12 years ago)
Nice hair coolcool9090 but fix the shading and it will be awesome.
Nice latest dress. The details looks awesome.
August 24, 2012 4:40 (12 years ago)
Ohh I like the color Sam but your shading on the chest area is to much. It should be lower down. And the bottom of the dress should be rounder. That is all XD
August 24, 2012 10:40 (12 years ago)
Mary Hair Half braided Hair
Fionna Zigzag pigtails
*Zigzag pigtails is the edited version
August 26, 2012 2:53 (12 years ago)
I fixed my Fire Wave dress :3
September 9, 2012 2:41 (12 years ago)
Woah no one is ever on anymore :<
September 10, 2012 12:10 (12 years ago)
That is I'm thinking too coolcool9090
September 10, 2012 15:48 (12 years ago)
Its probably because a lot of people on here have school or work... etc. ^^
September 11, 2012 4:00 (12 years ago)
I really do not like those colors Cool. It's like you are outlining the dress int he brightest red you can find and then coloring it orange, I don't get it.
Yes Karin is away and I think we all have jobs now too.
September 11, 2012 13:01 (12 years ago)
Come on! Why No one comments mine but to coolcool9090's?! COME ON! (Sorry coolcool9090. I'm not angry at you.)
September 13, 2012 14:11 (12 years ago)
Yea but the Colors are supposed to be fiery :< so you just want me to change the colors?
September 14, 2012 3:23 (12 years ago)
-gives the submission page some luff <3-
@tiffany: Hmm, I think putting "Comment please." in bold somewhere would get you some comments. We need that little "push" sometimes. Otherwise, we won't feel obligated to comment. :3
Anywhoo, here's my attempt to critique on your items:
Mary Hair: The bottom half of that hair looks flat if you cover the chibi face with 1 or 2 fingers. Try adding some shadow on the left side and some light shining through on the right. The top half of the hair looks alright though. Also, darker outlines please so that it matches the style of CPD's base. I like the soft colors though.^^
Half-Braided Hair:I think the parting of hair should be placed higher. Her hairline looks really close to where her eyebrow area is.
As for the braids, they are my arch-nemesis. I'll leave it for the pros to comment on that. xP
Fionna: Aajsfhl adventure time! <3 It would look great if there were darker outlines and darker shading on the hat, shirt, and skirt. The skirt's right side needs a more triangular look to like its left side.
Zigzag Pigtails: This is a great start! Darker outlines and darker shading would make it look more 3-D. And how about adding some strands of zigzag hair on the pigtails to make look less stiff and more flow-y like hair?
I hope I wasn't too harsh on my criticism and I hope you find it useful. ^-^
@coolcool: -is a fan of neon- I love those colors! I think the shading on the bottom could be less heavy/dark. A good tip on finding something out of place is to flip your piece horizontally. Maybe give that a try? :3
September 14, 2012 4:31 (12 years ago)
@Sparrow Do you mean the shading next to the skirt gathering or the shading under the skirt gathering?
September 14, 2012 5:15 (12 years ago)
I call it "Hanging stars".Comment please.
September 15, 2012 5:49 (12 years ago)
@coolcool:The shading next the gathering.
-digs up one of my fail tutorials- Maybe you will find this useful. XD;;
@samsam: It looks really decorative! The stars near her body look like they're floating or stuck to an invisible wall though. If that is unintentional, maybe you can elongate the string? :3
September 16, 2012 17:38 (12 years ago)
Karin who is our resident hair expert and MOD judge is away on vacation, so if I can't find anything obviously wrong with it, I leave it alone.
Yes Cool, I want you to change the outline color to something that is not so horrifically bright. It's all I can focus on every time I look at it.
September 16, 2012 17:44 (12 years ago)
Dark outlines are a MUST for submitting items, it's one of our golden rules.
September 17, 2012 10:22 (12 years ago)
This is the improvement of: "Hanging stars".
Comment please...Hope you like it...
September 17, 2012 14:15 (12 years ago)
@Samsamsierra I like it but, the stars look kinda squished, they look short. Also you may want to darken your outlines some more, or lighten the insides too.
September 19, 2012 13:07 (12 years ago)
I'll try to improve it(the stars' shading). But the stars, they're meant to be squished, because while I'm making it, I think the stars are squished by a giant. That's why they're like that...I imagine too much.
September 22, 2012 8:26 (12 years ago)
I'm still trying to improve the stars.
But I'll now submit my very first creation. Called it Leaf shoes. Comment please.
September 22, 2012 8:26 (12 years ago)
Here it is.
September 25, 2012 12:00 (12 years ago)
Darker outlines and darker shading on the green bit.
September 25, 2012 17:04 (12 years ago)
Doesn't look leafy at all to me. :x
September 26, 2012 3:49 (12 years ago)
Hmm Idk boredness idk just getting back into the swing of things
September 26, 2012 9:14 (12 years ago)
Improvemant of Leaf shoes.
Comment please
October 1, 2012 1:52 (12 years ago)
How's this?
Front Bangs
Layer behind the avatar
All together
October 1, 2012 18:42 (12 years ago)
Not bad, Puku! You got the double-layered-ness down. Take care though that it's really pixel art, soft lines will give ugly artifcats when they go on the site. I'm also not sure if the messiness of this hairstyle would appeal to people, so let's see some more.
October 2, 2012 4:03 (12 years ago)
Okay! :D
I used the pencil tool on photoshop, however I also use the blur tool, so this time, I suppose I won't?
October 2, 2012 4:29 (12 years ago)
Is this looking any better?
October 2, 2012 4:40 (12 years ago)
I also made Puppy ears :3
They would go on the ears the way cat or elf ears do, I would think.
On a base
With the Blonde Hair I made yesterday.
With Brunette Hair
Thoughts?
October 2, 2012 5:27 (12 years ago)
@Puku I think what Karin means is that you do the shading and the pixel and not just blurring the image to make it look like you shaded. Also when you zoom in there are some areas that dont have the outline (If that makes any sense?). Try making another hair with a palette of colors and actully shade it yourself and clean up the outside. Sorry if this isnt what karin met >w>
My thing to submit:
Ribboned Dress
Plain Dress
Emoticon Necklaces
I love them :)
I LOVE THE COLORS SO VERY MUCH
I'll improve it if there's something wrong.
Nice latest dress. The details looks awesome.
*Zigzag pigtails is the edited version
Yes Karin is away and I think we all have jobs now too.
@tiffany: Hmm, I think putting "Comment please." in bold somewhere would get you some comments. We need that little "push" sometimes. Otherwise, we won't feel obligated to comment. :3
Anywhoo, here's my attempt to critique on your items:
Mary Hair: The bottom half of that hair looks flat if you cover the chibi face with 1 or 2 fingers. Try adding some shadow on the left side and some light shining through on the right. The top half of the hair looks alright though. Also, darker outlines please so that it matches the style of CPD's base. I like the soft colors though.^^
Half-Braided Hair:I think the parting of hair should be placed higher. Her hairline looks really close to where her eyebrow area is.
As for the braids, they are my arch-nemesis. I'll leave it for the pros to comment on that. xP
Fionna: Aajsfhl adventure time! <3 It would look great if there were darker outlines and darker shading on the hat, shirt, and skirt. The skirt's right side needs a more triangular look to like its left side.
Zigzag Pigtails: This is a great start! Darker outlines and darker shading would make it look more 3-D. And how about adding some strands of zigzag hair on the pigtails to make look less stiff and more flow-y like hair?
I hope I wasn't too harsh on my criticism and I hope you find it useful. ^-^
@coolcool: -is a fan of neon- I love those colors! I think the shading on the bottom could be less heavy/dark. A good tip on finding something out of place is to flip your piece horizontally. Maybe give that a try? :3
I call it "Hanging stars".Comment please.
-digs up one of my fail tutorials- Maybe you will find this useful. XD;;
@samsam: It looks really decorative! The stars near her body look like they're floating or stuck to an invisible wall though. If that is unintentional, maybe you can elongate the string? :3
Yes Cool, I want you to change the outline color to something that is not so horrifically bright. It's all I can focus on every time I look at it.
This is the improvement of: "Hanging stars".
Comment please...Hope you like it...
But I'll now submit my very first creation. Called it Leaf shoes. Comment please.
Comment please
I used the pencil tool on photoshop, however I also use the blur tool, so this time, I suppose I won't?
Thoughts?