The outline looks better, maybe lighten the belt outline, it doesn't need to be as dark as the outer outline.
You should try to make different stuff to broaden your range, like maybe a skirt or top? Maybe try to add some more details to them?
September 1, 2014 13:02 (9 years ago)
Yey! ^_^
September 1, 2014 13:49 (9 years ago)
@RoboticSoul So here's for teh resubmition of the Rosie Dance and Prom Dress and for a skirt as you suggested.
1.Rosie Dance and Prom Dress
2.Glittery Turquoise Skirt
P.S me love glittery stuff TOO much. They're just TOO fab to handle xP
♥
^_^
September 1, 2014 21:38 (9 years ago)
Very sparklie! With the prom dress try to make the belt outline more dull dark pink. And remember to always zoom out and look and your stuff! Though you probs already are.
The skirts a nice colour, but it's very flat looking also besides the sparkles, it's plain. Try look what you did to the dress skirt, it looks like it's flowing down, very pretty.
Adding some detail to the skirt might be nice, like frilly bottom or maybe a split?Or pockets, something to give it mmore character.
September 2, 2014 10:47 (9 years ago)
@RoboticSoul about the Rosie Dance and Prom Dress thnk you!! ^_^
I try tomake a nicer shape for the Glittery Turquoise Skirt
BTW thanks again :D
I'll send the edited items ASAP ♥♥♥♥♥
September 2, 2014 12:55 (9 years ago)
@RoboticSoul done editing le stuffz like darkening and making the belt outline of dress more dull and dark and adding more details to the Turquoise Skirt xD
Herez le pics ^_^
1. Rosie Dance and Prom Dress
2. Glittery Turquoise Skirt
P.S I really dunno if it's just me and my "sometimes not in the mood" eyes or the skirt really looks WEIIIIRRRRRDDDDD..........and honestly.........I have a secret......(well now it's not) I'm very very very very very very very very very BAD at making skirts.........they usually end p looking WIERD........ :/
Well.....ummm........Hope you like it ^_^
♥
September 2, 2014 21:43 (9 years ago)
@chup I love how much effort your putting into your work, it's kinda inspiring in a weird way. Ur, the prom dress belt outline is now darker than the actual outline. And on the skirt I like the details especially what you did around the waist.
The reason the skirts don't look right is because they're kind of rigid like a strange triangle. You should try to make it more natural so it's more like hanging.
If you find that skirts are getting tricky try moving onto another thing, like hats or hair accessories? Then come back to them later.
September 3, 2014 12:30 (9 years ago)
@RoboticSoul here's the skirt! Done reshaping it ^_^
1.Glittery Turquoise Skirt
and I'm going to submit a new item which is a hat.
September 3, 2014 13:27 (9 years ago)
Tried an experiment. I think I failed xD
But hope you like it :P
RANDOM
Accessory : Heart and Pearls headband
September 4, 2014 12:54 (9 years ago)
When some meteor hits my head. I do something weird.
Background
1.Kawaii Creatures
Dress
1.Ice Princess Ball Gown
September 4, 2014 21:19 (9 years ago)
@chup okay the skirts shape looks better but I think you should change the shading a little, cause you can't really see it over all the glitter.
The hair bands design is a cute idea, but the strap looks straight instead of curved over the head and the hearts shape needs work.
The background scares me. The main thing you should work on is the shading, it should curve with the face not go straight down, it makes the faces look flat.
The dress is a lovely design, but the shapes a triangle again and the outlines too dark. Also with the skirt on the dress, remember the light comes from the top left not right above the head.
@Kawaii
Your dress is looking better! I would suggest using a color that is less neon but, I suppose you wouldn't need to in this instance because its supposed to be ice-like. For the "Crazy Hair" the bottom part of the hair is uneven and looks odd. Same with the "Crazie Blonde". The bangs for both of them look odd as well. Try to make them longer and less clumped together. Also with the "Crazie Blonde", the top part looks darker than the bottom so I'm not sure if you're going for a ombre or ? Please fix them and show us <3!
September 21, 2014 19:27 (9 years ago)
Oh chup chup you remind me so much of when I first tried to become an artist XD I never stopped posting items until they looked right, and I made it so I know one day you will too! :D Keep working as hard as you are now <3.
If it helps, try looking at other examples of hair, notice how they aren't as stringy as real hair, they indicate clumps. But with these clumps a few strands are also indicated so it doesn't look like texture-less. Try looking at other peoples' hair and, don't copy it, just look at how they make hair look like hair, there's lots of examples and eventually you will learn and develop your own style with it ^_^.
September 23, 2014 12:11 (9 years ago)
Thanks for the suggestions CC and Alerano ♥
I'll fix the hairs ASAP. But I might not be able to send them immediately because I'm busy everyday..............you know..........school. But I'll try my best to send it as soon as I can :D
September 23, 2014 12:40 (9 years ago)
CC : Thanks!!! I'm still practicing on the dress and especially on the hair which I'm having difficulties on. But I promise on my next submissions I will make the items I will submit even better than the one I did before :D
♥
September 23, 2014 13:25 (9 years ago)
Alerano : Thanks too!!! Thank you for cheering me up and letting me know that one day I can be an artist too. Thank you again for the support ^_^
Well, for starters lets go with basic shading, the lighting is coming from the left, so there will be a lot of shading on the right of the hair. {Example}
September 25, 2014 9:41 (9 years ago)
Thanks for the tip! Now this tip can really help me........A LOT!
September 25, 2014 10:19 (9 years ago)
How about this now? :D
Resubmission for Crazie Blonde
September 25, 2014 23:40 (9 years ago)
Well, you can't see the shading very well, try and make it a lot darker than the base colour, if it helps you could use a palette, {link}. Palettes are always an easy option for beginners because you get the right shades.
October 4, 2014 7:45 (9 years ago)
Sorry I resubmitted my edit late. I was too busy doing something else that I forgot to submit my edit. Sorry............but here it is!
Did an experiment to it. I dn't know if I liked the results hehehe....but here it is
October 4, 2014 22:08 (9 years ago)
Not bad, you can really see the shadows now. But the outline needs to be darker, mostly around your new shadows.
October 4, 2014 23:51 (9 years ago)
Yey thanks! I'll fix the outlines on the new shadows now and Resubmit as soon as I finish. :D
October 5, 2014 0:52 (9 years ago)
@Alerano Done editing the outlines!
Here is the pic:
October 5, 2014 1:09 (9 years ago)
Cool, the top still needs a bit more outline, but mostly i would recommend for starters changing the colours so there are only 2,light and shadow, when doing pixel art you only want a minimal amount of colours. :3
October 5, 2014 2:54 (9 years ago)
Should I change my shading???
October 5, 2014 3:00 (9 years ago)
not quite, just simplify it. Take 2 colours (leaving the outline out) and fill in all the other colours using the 2 you picked, you only want 2 colours to begin with, the base color and basic shading. Just look at the example i left you, theres only 2 colours besides the outline.
October 5, 2014 3:02 (9 years ago)
Ooooohhhh I get it!!! I'll do it now :D
October 5, 2014 3:51 (9 years ago)
So I edited the picture and made two of them. Which of these should is better and which of these should I continue to make?
October 5, 2014 3:53 (9 years ago)
Definitely the one on the right, i like how you can see the contrast clearly between the colours :3. That's the first step done, next it would be a good idea to add a few lines going through the hair, to indicate clumps of strands. After all, we don't want hair to look like a textureless blob on top of our heads ;D. Great work so far!
October 5, 2014 3:56 (9 years ago)
(or if you'd prefer to skip that step)You can go further into highlights and shadows by adding a 3rd colour of shading to the right or maybe a colour of highlight going around the ring of her head.
October 5, 2014 4:03 (9 years ago)
Thanks Alerano!!! Your tips are so helpful!!! I will send the edited pic as soon as I finish. <3
October 5, 2014 10:18 (9 years ago)
Is it okay if I don't put the ring but I just put the lines going through the hair?
October 5, 2014 15:11 (9 years ago)
So while I was taking a break on fixing the hair, I tried making this!
Le Colourful
October 6, 2014 6:37 (9 years ago)
Halloween is near so I made this dress.
I also put it in 5 different poses.
Hope you like it ^_^
Kawaii Halloween
October 7, 2014 13:18 (9 years ago)
There were errors in the second and the last picture it so I'm very sorry if I have to repeat posting those pictures.
October 17, 2014 14:42 (9 years ago)
I tried to make a hair c:
October 17, 2014 18:54 (9 years ago)
And an outfit and some make up to go with the hair~
October 17, 2014 21:00 (9 years ago)
Nice work! I hope our art supervisors will have some time for you soon~
October 18, 2014 13:36 (9 years ago)
ooo llama I really love those :O
I'd love to see more ^w^
October 18, 2014 17:53 (9 years ago)
Thanks!
Did a gala-ish dress ^^
October 18, 2014 19:07 (9 years ago)
Looks great! Don't forget this is pixel art so try not to blend the colors too much so they don't look blurry ;D!
October 18, 2014 19:10 (9 years ago)
Oh, yeah xD It's a really bad habbit, but I'll try to make it look more "pixely" ^^
You should try to make different stuff to broaden your range, like maybe a skirt or top? Maybe try to add some more details to them?
and for a skirt as you suggested.
1.Rosie Dance and Prom Dress
2.Glittery Turquoise Skirt
P.S me love glittery stuff TOO much. They're just TOO fab to handle xP
♥
^_^
The skirts a nice colour, but it's very flat looking also besides the sparkles, it's plain. Try look what you did to the dress skirt, it looks like it's flowing down, very pretty.
Adding some detail to the skirt might be nice, like frilly bottom or maybe a split?Or pockets, something to give it mmore character.
I try tomake a nicer shape for the Glittery Turquoise Skirt
BTW thanks again :D
I'll send the edited items ASAP ♥♥♥♥♥
Herez le pics ^_^
1. Rosie Dance and Prom Dress
2. Glittery Turquoise Skirt
P.S I really dunno if it's just me and my "sometimes not in the mood" eyes or the skirt really looks WEIIIIRRRRRDDDDD..........and honestly.........I have a secret......(well now it's not) I'm very very very very very very very very very BAD at making skirts.........they usually end p looking WIERD........ :/
Well.....ummm........Hope you like it ^_^
♥
The reason the skirts don't look right is because they're kind of rigid like a strange triangle. You should try to make it more natural so it's more like hanging.
If you find that skirts are getting tricky try moving onto another thing, like hats or hair accessories? Then come back to them later.
1.Glittery Turquoise Skirt
and I'm going to submit a new item which is a hat.
But hope you like it :P
RANDOM
Accessory : Heart and Pearls headband
Background
1.Kawaii Creatures
Dress
1.Ice Princess Ball Gown
The hair bands design is a cute idea, but the strap looks straight instead of curved over the head and the hearts shape needs work.
The background scares me. The main thing you should work on is the shading, it should curve with the face not go straight down, it makes the faces look flat.
The dress is a lovely design, but the shapes a triangle again and the outlines too dark. Also with the skirt on the dress, remember the light comes from the top left not right above the head.
1. Glittery Turquoise Skirt
2. Kawaii Creatures
3. Ice Princess Ball Gown
Here it is
Crazy Hair
Crazie Blonde
Your dress is looking better! I would suggest using a color that is less neon but, I suppose you wouldn't need to in this instance because its supposed to be ice-like. For the "Crazy Hair" the bottom part of the hair is uneven and looks odd. Same with the "Crazie Blonde". The bangs for both of them look odd as well. Try to make them longer and less clumped together. Also with the "Crazie Blonde", the top part looks darker than the bottom so I'm not sure if you're going for a ombre or ? Please fix them and show us <3!
If it helps, try looking at other examples of hair, notice how they aren't as stringy as real hair, they indicate clumps. But with these clumps a few strands are also indicated so it doesn't look like texture-less. Try looking at other peoples' hair and, don't copy it, just look at how they make hair look like hair, there's lots of examples and eventually you will learn and develop your own style with it ^_^.
I'll fix the hairs ASAP. But I might not be able to send them immediately because I'm busy everyday..............you know..........school. But I'll try my best to send it as soon as I can :D
♥
Resubmission of Crazie Blonde
HERE'S THE CORRECT FILE :D
Resubmission for Crazie Blonde
Did an experiment to it. I dn't know if I liked the results hehehe....but here it is
Here is the pic:
Le Colourful
I also put it in 5 different poses.
Hope you like it ^_^
Kawaii Halloween
And an outfit and some make up to go with the hair~
I'd love to see more ^w^