oh, I forgot... I usually forget some stuff every time I see them, sorry...
October 15, 2012 11:28 (12 years ago)
Its OK Sam. At least you gave your effort. Besides, all of the color schemes are AWESOME so much that I want to wear all of them.
October 15, 2012 11:36 (12 years ago)
Resubmission of Katniss Braid:
..and Renaissance Dress that I designed:
October 16, 2012 8:36 (12 years ago)
Aigoo! They're all so amazing, Tiffany!
October 17, 2012 2:40 (12 years ago)
@Tiffany Cute Dress! Atleast all I see is it needs darkeroutlines and shading :3
October 17, 2012 2:41 (12 years ago)
*darker outlines XD
October 17, 2012 10:15 (12 years ago)
As predicted. How about Katniss Braid.
October 17, 2012 12:58 (12 years ago)
Not well much fixed Renaissance Dress
October 17, 2012 14:24 (12 years ago)
I'm not very good at hair so I really wouldn't know XD
October 17, 2012 14:24 (12 years ago)
Ohhh it's looks better :3
October 18, 2012 10:20 (12 years ago)
pls comment on simple lace dress and what other colors you want me to add and what do you guys prefer this hairstyle or this and if you want me to add more colors pls tell me what colors ^^
October 19, 2012 3:32 (12 years ago)
The dress needs darker outlines! And more shading around the chest/bust area. I also don't understand why the dress goes sideways. :3
October 19, 2012 6:15 (12 years ago)
its kinda design ok I will work on it ^^
October 20, 2012 11:32 (12 years ago)
denan, your hair's shadings is fine but the hair is too straight. That is all.
October 20, 2012 11:54 (12 years ago)
That's right, we like really detailed items best.
October 20, 2012 12:15 (12 years ago)
I will work on it ^^
October 21, 2012 3:06 (12 years ago)
heres the lace dress with darker outlines and with shadings about the hair I will just make another design ^.^
October 22, 2012 4:29 (12 years ago)
I separated my work "Double Colors".
Dark:
Light:
Comment please...
October 22, 2012 9:55 (12 years ago)
That just sounds like you're trying to cheat us.
Try making some different items, you're not a site artist yet.
October 22, 2012 10:32 (12 years ago)
ok..
October 22, 2012 10:45 (12 years ago)
I just made this earlier. It's called Robot mask. Comment please.
October 26, 2012 20:20 (12 years ago)
I think it's pretty good but it's a bit like idk how to explain it like it goes off the face & that part I don't really like ^^
this is mine
http://oi50.tinypic.com/2z7eems.jpg
sorry idk how to post it so it shows on the topic + i'm on my other computer posting this my other computer has the real copy ^^
October 27, 2012 2:46 (12 years ago)
It's too large. It needs shading... It's too puffy in the bottom... maybe? Try to improve it. HWAITING! (Fighting)
October 27, 2012 2:48 (12 years ago)
Anyway, I created a Robot face, not a mask. I got wrong in the name... If my grammar is wrong, please correct it..
October 27, 2012 5:02 (12 years ago)
(-sigh- I knew I wasn't fit for pixeling...)
It's good~
October 27, 2012 8:19 (12 years ago)
Now now, you shouldn't give up just like that. The main problem with the item as it is now is that you didn't finish it. You didn't clean up the line art or shade it. And it's not as detailed. Just keep improving it, it takes a lot of people here many tries, but if your items are up to the standards in the end you'll be made an artist.
October 27, 2012 9:11 (12 years ago)
Think positive, Jaychan. Or else your life will be negative! Jus Improve it. Someday, you'll improve it, I'm sure of it...
~My weird quotes have a good meaning.~
October 27, 2012 13:41 (12 years ago)
Awkard...I just felt a stab on my chest on being a pessimist(negative thinker).
@Jaychan don't worry. Just a little fix on the outline and shading, and it will be great. I had drawings then I thought we're good but during those times I encountered some negative thinking too. I still didn't give up. Little by little, my drawings gone AWESOME. Every time I saw my old drawings, I felt that I did improved a lot. In short, I super feel what you feel and YOU CAN DO IT!
October 27, 2012 18:11 (12 years ago)
aww thanx you guys <3 also the outline... does it need to be darker~? also I still don't know how to shade even tho robotic soul showed me soo many times well idk what tool to use since I have the new paint T-T
October 27, 2012 18:12 (12 years ago)
O.O & sorry Karin if I sound like that >.<
October 27, 2012 18:48 (12 years ago)
Meep :3. Well Jaychan, I think its very cute ^^! Make sure to clean up the outlines of the dress to one pixel width. And you need to shade it :3 Everyone has different ways to shade so you can find a way you feel comfortable with :D
October 28, 2012 4:26 (12 years ago)
okie ^^ thanx you guys <3
October 30, 2012 9:37 (12 years ago)
I would like to submit this it is called flower dress
October 30, 2012 10:51 (12 years ago)
pretty!
October 30, 2012 10:55 (12 years ago)
It is sure pretty. All you need I think is to de-straighten the skirt
October 31, 2012 1:35 (12 years ago)
thank you ok I will de-straighten it
October 31, 2012 1:51 (12 years ago)
Lace Dress Dark:
Lace Dress Light:
October 31, 2012 1:58 (12 years ago)
Is this what you mean? ^^
October 31, 2012 2:02 (12 years ago)
Thats cute, Denan! Darker outlines! You also need darker shading on the bottom part of the dress. The bottom of the dress should also be more rounded at the bottom. The center crease is to straight and you could maybe make it a little squiggly? (If this makes any sense LOL) Omg I just noticed how many times I said "bottom" X3
October 31, 2012 2:58 (12 years ago)
coolcool9090, how about mine.
October 31, 2012 4:12 (12 years ago)
coolcool9090, you said bottom 4x including "bottom"
October 31, 2012 4:31 (12 years ago)
pretty dress, Denan and Tiffany!
October 31, 2012 4:33 (12 years ago)
@tiffany: you need to curve out the belt
October 31, 2012 4:34 (12 years ago)
LOL. I really like those dresses and cant wait to wear them >:3 I think the outlines need to be darker. If your working in paint.net, there is a lever thing in the color section that make the color darker and not lighter. But with paint you would just have to go really far down the color picker. The shading needs to be darker. The sash needs an outline in my opinion. Maybe some more shading under the sash. On the bottom of the dress you can see the foot of the base. Maybe move it one pixel down if you can to cover it. LOL maximum comment!
November 1, 2012 10:32 (12 years ago)
V3 Yuzuki Yukari Hair
source:Concept art Such a fail *facepalm*
November 2, 2012 0:57 (12 years ago)
@tiffany_may
Darker outlines, lighter highlight.
Also the back of the hair looks like it just stops..
But its a nice style.
November 2, 2012 1:05 (12 years ago)
@tiffany: front hair looks like it's been cut, make the scrunchies darker.
@Tiffany I like the dresses but they need a lot more shading. Darker outlines as well. Try shading just a couple of lines at a time, downgrading the color each time with the pencil tool.
November 2, 2012 15:56 (12 years ago)
Oh I'm talking about the candy dresses. The top two X3
..and Renaissance Dress that I designed:
Dark:
Light:
Comment please...
Try making some different items, you're not a site artist yet.
this is mine
http://oi50.tinypic.com/2z7eems.jpg
sorry idk how to post it so it shows on the topic + i'm on my other computer posting this my other computer has the real copy ^^
It's good~
~My weird quotes have a good meaning.~
@Jaychan don't worry. Just a little fix on the outline and shading, and it will be great. I had drawings then I thought we're good but during those times I encountered some negative thinking too. I still didn't give up. Little by little, my drawings gone AWESOME. Every time I saw my old drawings, I felt that I did improved a lot. In short, I super feel what you feel and YOU CAN DO IT!
Lace Dress Light:
source:Concept art
Such a fail *facepalm*
Darker outlines, lighter highlight.
Also the back of the hair looks like it just stops..
But its a nice style.
Source:Cheerful Candy
Colorful Drop Module:
Source:Colorful Drop