Curls Hair Ponytail
Patterned Dress ???? (haven't got title yet)
Red Dress
Wavy-Sea or Blue Dress ?
i need advices to improove :| these
April 16, 2012 21:55 (13 years ago)
That Princess Dress looks great Vani!
April 17, 2012 0:15 (13 years ago)
*o* omg pink rose they look so adorable <3333 and vani, i love the ones you made :D somehow i have a feeling and it wont be long before those dresses will be on the submission page X3
April 17, 2012 2:08 (13 years ago)
Fixed!!!
April 17, 2012 4:00 (13 years ago)
okay the creases need fixing what do u think is wrong ;.; havent done the outline yet.
April 17, 2012 21:47 (13 years ago)
Thank you so much Azkhadellia~! It's thanks to you I could make it!
Thank you too, Alerano! <3
April 18, 2012 21:54 (13 years ago)
ahhhhh vani i have some tips for u
skype me sometime soon <3
May 6, 2012 13:03 (12 years ago)
please comment
May 6, 2012 22:49 (12 years ago)
@denan
it needs darker outlines, theres no shading and you need to work on the shape ^-^ if you ever see me in chatbox ill give tips~
May 7, 2012 4:16 (12 years ago)
ok I will work on it
May 7, 2012 6:16 (12 years ago)
done I will call it wolf tail dress. again please comment.
Denan I suggest looking at some of the dresses already on the site to get ideas for improving your shaping, dresses shouldn't be flat on the bottom nor should any part of it be completely straight because our bodies aren't flat.
I know you can do it though! ^^
May 8, 2012 7:45 (12 years ago)
ok how about these
May 8, 2012 7:45 (12 years ago)
black brown and gray
May 8, 2012 8:41 (12 years ago)
May 8, 2012 15:21 (12 years ago)
Kimi: The hair clip needs darker outline and i think we already have that kind of hairclip so maybe you would want to add an extra thing to it or maybe resize it.. make it bigger.
The dress looks cute but you should totally change those white straight line into curves, following the body's curves as well and loose the bottom line.. stick with 2 curve lines or resize the height between them because the 3rd one it's covering the bottom of the dress.
Add darker outline to the leg warmers .. or whatever are they called.
May 9, 2012 8:18 (12 years ago)
okay, this is the one I made according from the artist test... I made a few changes though, hope you don't mind
OHMIGOSH Rose that is AMAZING :O I think your edits are an improvment as well!
I suggest making your outlines a bit darker and otlining the pink outer skirt over the white under skirtand maybe more shading on the right side since thats how our lighting works on the dolls
May 10, 2012 16:07 (12 years ago)
I'm glad you'd like it :D
May 14, 2012 2:58 (12 years ago)
hmmmm i was bored one day and made this :3 Comments?
May 14, 2012 3:23 (12 years ago)
please comment I kinda pixelixed our school uniform and it turns out tobe like this please comment
May 14, 2012 3:25 (12 years ago)
its called uniform dress
May 14, 2012 23:15 (12 years ago)
That's really cute denan but (I'm not an artists so you dont have to do this lol) the shading on the front do the shirt is kinda straight down.
May 14, 2012 23:16 (12 years ago)
*of
May 22, 2012 3:59 (12 years ago)
items I also like to submit lace dress
and flower hair pin
Tiffany: The ruffles on the first version are a little high on the right side. It looks a bit odd to me. Try to keep them uniform with the underskirt's edge.
May 24, 2012 0:05 (12 years ago)
i kinda think the ruffles were meant to be A-symmetrical, if thats the case than i think it looks really good! but you need darker outlines and shading, right now it doesnt look like its shaded at all :O
May 24, 2012 3:27 (12 years ago)
here is the flower hairpin I like to submit
I kinda fixed the shading of the uniform dress any improvement???
@tiffany_may
you still need darker outlines and darker/more shading
personally i think you need to fix the bottom skirt part of the dress on the right
it looks like its rounded over.. which is really weird
the dress also stretches too much to the left imo also
anywho asides from that, great job and cute dress!
May 25, 2012 8:19 (12 years ago)
the design of the dress suppose to be this:
(the ruffles suppose to be slanted)
Even if the outlines of your reference picture are light, it doesn't mean they can be light on site items, because those have to confirm to our style.
May 25, 2012 16:45 (12 years ago)
ya the outlines for ALL items need to fit our site requirements otherwise they dont fit the rest of the items on the site, also on the ruffle dress I sugest making the belt not so straight, it should be a pixel higher on both ends because our bodies arent flat
May 26, 2012 2:36 (12 years ago)
I wasn't mentioning about the outlines. I just telling that the ruffles of the dress suppose to be slanted
May 26, 2012 2:38 (12 years ago)
I would suggest attacking it like it was two separate dresses.
Do the blue dress first, with the ruffles and then make the white skirt under it.
Depending on how you started this item, it might make it easier to do it you had started with the white skirt and tried to build the blue one off of it.
May 26, 2012 2:51 (12 years ago)
IA Hair IA Shirt
IA Skirt IA Socks IA Shoes All together
May 26, 2012 3:17 (12 years ago)
The shirt looks really busy to me, like I can't see any sleeve lines or anything on it either.
I'm having a hard time seeing the hair (I'm tired)
The socks don't look correct when compared to the ref image.
The skirt looks stiff to me, if it has pleats then each pleat is at a different level.
The shoe color bothers me, but if that is the color it's supposed to be, then whatever, lol.
May 26, 2012 13:21 (12 years ago)
I kinda put some folds in the dress and some changes please comment though
May 26, 2012 23:18 (12 years ago)
@Az The Hair is kinda WIP(the hair lines). I just tried what would you think about it.
@denan123 Even though I'm not an artist, the image is in .jpg format that I can't see much of the folds.(in short, the photo suppose to be png format not jpg)
May 27, 2012 1:02 (12 years ago)
Time to put down the IA Outfit and go back to the Angel Dress. So, I took Az's idea about making it as separate dresses so here:
(no ruffles) (ruffles only)
(all together)
*Please tell me if I need to darken the outline. ^w~
May 27, 2012 1:21 (12 years ago)
I'm thinking of doing items again, so I might be putting up items here again. I'm just thinking of what to make.
May 27, 2012 2:38 (12 years ago)
I put it again as an png file please comment again though
Patterned Dress ???? (haven't got title yet)
Red Dress
Wavy-Sea or Blue Dress ?
i need advices to improove :| these
Thank you too, Alerano! <3
skype me sometime soon <3
it needs darker outlines, theres no shading and you need to work on the shape ^-^ if you ever see me in chatbox ill give tips~
I know you can do it though! ^^
The dress looks cute but you should totally change those white straight line into curves, following the body's curves as well and loose the bottom line.. stick with 2 curve lines or resize the height between them because the 3rd one it's covering the bottom of the dress.
Add darker outline to the leg warmers .. or whatever are they called.
I suggest making your outlines a bit darker and otlining the pink outer skirt over the white under skirtand maybe more shading on the right side since thats how our lighting works on the dolls
please comment I kinda pixelixed our school uniform and it turns out tobe like this please comment
lace dress
and
flower hair pin
here is the flower hairpin I like to submit
I kinda fixed the shading of the uniform dress any improvement???
It is suppose to be the dress of this:
http://i45.tinypic.com/f3pfo.png
you still need darker outlines and darker/more shading
personally i think you need to fix the bottom skirt part of the dress on the right
it looks like its rounded over.. which is really weird
the dress also stretches too much to the left imo also
anywho asides from that, great job and cute dress!
(the ruffles suppose to be slanted)
this is suppose to be IA's shirt
ref pic:
http://images.wikia.com/vocaloid/images/5/50/IAreference.jpg
Do the blue dress first, with the ruffles and then make the white skirt under it.
Depending on how you started this item, it might make it easier to do it you had started with the white skirt and tried to build the blue one off of it.
I'm having a hard time seeing the hair (I'm tired)
The socks don't look correct when compared to the ref image.
The skirt looks stiff to me, if it has pleats then each pleat is at a different level.
The shoe color bothers me, but if that is the color it's supposed to be, then whatever, lol.
I kinda put some folds in the dress and some changes please comment though
@denan123 Even though I'm not an artist, the image is in .jpg format that I can't see much of the folds.(in short, the photo suppose to be png format not jpg)
*Please tell me if I need to darken the outline. ^w~