@Pink: The shading on the skirt part needs to go the opposite way.
Like now it's this way: /
It should be this way: \
The last one you linked, I think the shading is too intense. This one is better.
@Mika: It's cute, a little busy though, and needs shading and darker outlines.
March 16, 2012 4:15 (13 years ago)
March 17, 2012 15:07 (13 years ago)
Haha, these dresses are really cute! :)
The only things I see wrong are:
a. The dress "corset", or the little v-shaped collar, is leaning the wrong way. The right side should be longer, not the left side.
and b. The shading; make sure you're not using lighting, okay? ONLY shading.
Otherwise, I love it! The design is very intriguing, and somehow reminds me of Chinese culture.
March 17, 2012 15:40 (13 years ago)
I agree with Emirii, the corset is leaning the opposite way but anyway it looks cute~
March 17, 2012 16:30 (13 years ago)
Emi, you can use highlights, if that's what you're saying not to use... o.O
Pink, you need to remove a line of shading on the right side: http://i42.tinypic.com/e8js68.png
And using less colors for shading would look better. With that many levels of shading it makes it look hazy.
March 17, 2012 16:43 (13 years ago)
Rose:
No lighting, right?
On cloth, only shading.
Lighting looks crappy.
Unless the dress is made out of plastic or aluminum.
March 18, 2012 1:38 (13 years ago)
@emirii
...umm i really have to disagree with that statement
who says clothes dont have lighting?
its really your choice and some people can pull off lighting and some people cant
just cus you add lighting doesnt mean it looks like "crap"
March 18, 2012 5:12 (13 years ago)
Edited. I made the base a bit darker but, tell me if I should just stick with this one.
March 18, 2012 19:08 (13 years ago)
....
Well Alina told me this. So.
o________o
Sorry sorry
I'll just go back to my emo corner now
Well, like star said it's a matter for how it's done. I meant that lighting isn't needed and that you can do just fine with just shading. Most of the time you really only want to add highlighting depending on the sheen of your material and it can really define the material or sheen an outfit is meant to have.
I don't suggest highlighting to beginners since a lot of times it's over done and just makes an item look like its made of rubber. XD
March 20, 2012 23:36 (13 years ago)
I agree with smile that the first one is best, the shades go together better.
March 21, 2012 6:08 (13 years ago)
umm... I sort of didn't get the which part was the highlighted. . .
March 21, 2012 16:07 (13 years ago)
In summary of Alina's post:
Pink you don't had to worry about highlighting.
March 27, 2012 12:55 (13 years ago)
oh, so basing on Alina's post I have to make folds on the dress otherwise it looks rubber ^^;
.....okay I'll work on it :)
April 2, 2012 16:00 (13 years ago)
since my first ones looked more of rubber, I made folds on the dress, but it's missing something...
April 2, 2012 18:34 (13 years ago)
hmm i think id like to see you work on some more items ^^
April 3, 2012 13:31 (13 years ago)
~I can insert these dresses without, remaking them on a different pose, thanks to layers ^_~ linky~~
April 3, 2012 17:31 (13 years ago)
oooo I reallly like these! :O I suggest darker outlines for both of them and darker shading, because i pretty much cant see the shading at all X3 also id like to see these posted with the doll base rather than without it please ;3
April 3, 2012 17:53 (13 years ago)
ok ^^, while I'm working on that I also have made this:
April 3, 2012 22:37 (13 years ago)
i think the outlines and shades need to be darker on it but i LOVE the pink one you made earlier!<3 its just so adorable!
April 5, 2012 4:35 (13 years ago)
For the pink one I made earlier, can somebody just pick on what's best
1 or 2 or 3 or 4 For the white one I made earlier
April 5, 2012 11:45 (13 years ago)
i like 4 the best!
also, i think darker outlines for the white dress, it looks purdy :D
April 5, 2012 14:32 (13 years ago)
okay, down to 2 on the pink one - pick and comment if there's anymore on the pic to change or improve,: link~ or link1~
On the pink dress i love the shading in pic 2 and the outlines of pic 4 (first group of pics ;3)
the white dress looks fab but you shouldnt double the outline pixels at the bottom ;3
The design on the bodice of the blue dress is so cute! :D
April 6, 2012 0:18 (13 years ago)
your items are so cute pink ^^
April 6, 2012 7:16 (13 years ago)
- pink dress combo, according to Alina: link for the pink dress - and the white dress w/ no double outline on the bottom: link for white dress - and I have a question, does the blue one qualify for the Submission Page ?
April 6, 2012 22:27 (13 years ago)
Dont worry about that till AFTER your an artist! ;3 atm I'd just keep moving forward and work on making better and better pieces!
When I think you're ready I'll send you a pm and test you ;3
April 11, 2012 23:44 (13 years ago)
Is this okay? I cant really do shading very well so if its not right can you tell me where it should go?
April 11, 2012 23:44 (13 years ago)
oops i mean this lol
April 12, 2012 12:18 (13 years ago)
its a cat right? :O i think the left hind leg needs to be properly drawn, and i think you need alot more shadows, mainly on the right, and also where the light doesn't go through.
April 12, 2012 12:56 (13 years ago)
That's a big kitty.
April 12, 2012 20:35 (13 years ago)
Top one has a crosshatch and more silk, while the bottom one has no crosshatch and less silk. Which one is better? I haven't pixelled in a while, so I'm sorta unsteady again, haha.
Nepeta Leijon Hat
Nepeta Leijon Tail!
April 13, 2012 13:29 (13 years ago)
April 13, 2012 18:13 (13 years ago)
this one took me a while but its like a prom dress i tried lots of other time and Rose Mouse said it looked good soo I wanted to show you to see if its alright :D
April 13, 2012 19:13 (13 years ago)
It's real pretty Pink Rose. :3
April 14, 2012 17:00 (13 years ago)
Thanks Kenran :D and here's the blue one with base and another one I recently made:
April 14, 2012 23:00 (13 years ago)
i was bored and i wanted to practice my pixeling and here is what i made :3 Here is another that i dont really think looks right... >.< Pleaseeee comment i really think if i see whats wrong from an expert it will be easier ^^
April 15, 2012 5:37 (13 years ago)
Lol im going crazy with pixels X3 here is another dress.
April 15, 2012 7:45 (13 years ago)
I think I just made the worst looking shirt in the universe. XD
April 15, 2012 8:03 (13 years ago)
i love those dresses pink rose!~ :D
and cool, i think the skirt on the bottom one needs to come out a bit further, (atm it goes straight down then poofs out, it needs to poof out at a higher point, its hard to explain ^^; im bad with words) but you need darker outlines too.
As for the top, it needs darker outlines, and darker shading. also add something to them, make a pattern or put a butterfly on them or something, that makes them more unique and therefore more likely to be accepted.
Lastly, for the bottom one, darker outlines, and the darkest shade also needs to be darker too. also remember to add a unique touch to make it stand out. I think it would look better shorter too. ^^
April 15, 2012 9:13 (13 years ago)
okay while I'm working on that
April 15, 2012 20:40 (13 years ago)
Merp merp i made another Long long dress. Star helped me with the dress too :D
April 16, 2012 3:43 (13 years ago)
Blue version of the other dress because i needed to fix somethings.
April 16, 2012 4:03 (13 years ago)
shading needs to be darker :3 also it needs to be more rounded off at the bottom, it looks to flat.
April 16, 2012 15:52 (13 years ago)
Orange dress? c:
April 16, 2012 15:54 (13 years ago)
Purple ball gown..Need help on this one! *nudge nudge*
April 16, 2012 15:54 (13 years ago)
Princess dress!
April 16, 2012 15:56 (13 years ago)
Stella from Dragon Quest's Wings! <3
April 16, 2012 16:27 (13 years ago)
Curls Hair Ponytail
Patterned Dress ???? (haven't got title yet)
Red Dress
Wavy-Sea or Blue Dress ?
i need advices to improove :| these
Like now it's this way: /
It should be this way: \
The last one you linked, I think the shading is too intense. This one is better.
@Mika: It's cute, a little busy though, and needs shading and darker outlines.
The only things I see wrong are:
a. The dress "corset", or the little v-shaped collar, is leaning the wrong way. The right side should be longer, not the left side.
and b. The shading; make sure you're not using lighting, okay? ONLY shading.
Otherwise, I love it! The design is very intriguing, and somehow reminds me of Chinese culture.
Pink, you need to remove a line of shading on the right side: http://i42.tinypic.com/e8js68.png
And using less colors for shading would look better. With that many levels of shading it makes it look hazy.
No lighting, right?
On cloth, only shading.
Lighting looks crappy.
Unless the dress is made out of plastic or aluminum.
...umm i really have to disagree with that statement
who says clothes dont have lighting?
its really your choice and some people can pull off lighting and some people cant
just cus you add lighting doesnt mean it looks like "crap"
Well Alina told me this. So.
o________o
Sorry sorry
I'll just go back to my emo corner now
or
http://i43.tinypic.com/343n05v.png
I don't suggest highlighting to beginners since a lot of times it's over done and just makes an item look like its made of rubber. XD
Pink you don't had to worry about highlighting.
.....okay I'll work on it :)
1 or 2 or 3 or 4
For the white one I made earlier
also, i think darker outlines for the white dress, it looks purdy :D
the white dress looks fab but you shouldnt double the outline pixels at the bottom ;3
The design on the bodice of the blue dress is so cute! :D
- and the white dress w/ no double outline on the bottom: link for white dress
- and I have a question, does the blue one qualify for the Submission Page ?
When I think you're ready I'll send you a pm and test you ;3
Top one has a crosshatch and more silk, while the bottom one has no crosshatch and less silk. Which one is better? I haven't pixelled in a while, so I'm sorta unsteady again, haha.
Nepeta Leijon Hat
Nepeta Leijon Tail!
Here is another that i dont really think looks right... >.<
and cool, i think the skirt on the bottom one needs to come out a bit further, (atm it goes straight down then poofs out, it needs to poof out at a higher point, its hard to explain ^^; im bad with words) but you need darker outlines too.
As for the top, it needs darker outlines, and darker shading. also add something to them, make a pattern or put a butterfly on them or something, that makes them more unique and therefore more likely to be accepted.
Lastly, for the bottom one, darker outlines, and the darkest shade also needs to be darker too. also remember to add a unique touch to make it stand out. I think it would look better shorter too. ^^
Patterned Dress ???? (haven't got title yet)
Red Dress
Wavy-Sea or Blue Dress ?
i need advices to improove :| these