@Kyoyoku does the sleeves have to be too long? Could you post reference pic 'cause its hard to tell if it is supposed be like that if the ref pic is not there.
But not bad. Just need darker outlines and more shading and that might work, well it depends to the moderators anyway
January 1, 2013 5:22 (12 years ago)
That's not bad Kyo-chan! As Tiffany said darker outlines and a lot more shading. I'd like to see more from you! Try a dress or a skirt. Keep up the good work!
January 1, 2013 7:46 (12 years ago)
Plain Dress- (Black, White):
Puff-ish Dress (Pink, Purple, Softgree):
Still don't know what to name them:
January 1, 2013 8:42 (12 years ago)
Cute Items Candy_Sweet. I so wanna wear them.
January 2, 2013 3:44 (12 years ago)
okay ill work on it some more
here is a reference pic for it its supposed to be that long cause it a straight jacket xD
I think maybe darker outlines for the Ocean Bracelet
January 19, 2013 0:55 (12 years ago)
Oookay, my first time to submit an item..
I made Angel Twintails into Black, Pink, And blonde colors. .u.
Did i make the outlines too dark? :x
Feedback pls ty. ^^
January 19, 2013 4:25 (12 years ago)
not dark enough! but the hair is quite lovely :O i think you could make it a bit shinier too :O
January 19, 2013 6:27 (12 years ago)
I agree with Alina, but also looking at it i can't tell they're pigtails, there needs to be some sort of partition of some sort.
And the left pigtail is kinda off, you might want to take a second look.
Other than that, it is a brilliant first submission, keep up the good work!
January 19, 2013 17:00 (12 years ago)
Ooh! Darker line art is required but otherwise completely awesome!
January 20, 2013 7:41 (12 years ago)
Oh! Thanks for the appreciation on my first submission! :D And yeah i need more work on it. ||D
So i decided to make shirts this time:
Heart T-Shirt. (Black, Pink, and White.)
Looks like i find making hair is easier than tops. =u=
January 20, 2013 7:48 (12 years ago)
I suggest darker outlines and darker shading. But there adorable. >w<
January 20, 2013 8:15 (12 years ago)
Made the tops' outlines darker and shading better. :3
Eyup.
January 20, 2013 9:37 (12 years ago)
It's not enough, the line art on items should be the same darkness as the doll base's line art to not clash with the style.
January 20, 2013 10:32 (12 years ago)
Ah, you mean i have to make the darkness of the items equal to the doll?
Okay, i think i have improved most of them this time...
Sorry if i keep reposting too much. :c
January 20, 2013 11:18 (12 years ago)
That looks much better! For the pink/yellow hair it could still be a little darker I think. The one thing that still bothers me, is that you shouldn't just do the outlines in this color, but also the rest of the line art, some line art seems to be missing now, like the division between the head hair and the pigtails. And the wrinkles in the armpits of the shirt. The shirt also looks like it could use a little more shading. Remember the light comes in from the upper left.
January 20, 2013 13:14 (12 years ago)
Ah, okay, so you mean i'm missing the line between the pigtails and the line from the shirt's sleeve? :o
Okay i'm not sure if i made it right but i think i fixed it:
Iv'e made additional skirts too.
I call it Pastel Skirt. (Pink and Blue colors.)
I'm not that good at making skirts because the pattern seems too confusing. :c
January 20, 2013 13:17 (12 years ago)
OOPS! I got the white shirt image wrong! Dx
January 20, 2013 16:18 (12 years ago)
Skirts always look a bit weird on their own, because of the base. At this point, I think I've seen enough to make you a site artist. This means you get upload access to the submissions page. Congratulations!
Be sure to check out the hair and sleeve tutorials to make your items compatible with arm poses and elf ears, too!
January 20, 2013 17:04 (12 years ago)
Congratulation Aki!
Being an site artist is just too hard for me
January 21, 2013 0:47 (12 years ago)
OMGOMGOMG THANK YOU SO MUCH! *o*
Yayyy~ :D
O wait do i still have to submit the items or are the items already submitted? .u.
January 21, 2013 1:16 (12 years ago)
I don't know but, I really like the hair
January 21, 2013 8:16 (12 years ago)
Nope, you still have to upload them through the submissions page.
January 21, 2013 21:34 (12 years ago)
I'm suddenly remembering why I decided I was never going to make a top... XD just...8 sleeves to go *dies*
January 21, 2013 22:14 (12 years ago)
That's the cutest dress I've ever seen. ;u;
January 21, 2013 22:19 (12 years ago)
Aww T~T Thanks. Just a few more sleeves to go. I may make it in other colors too if I don't completely mess up the submitting (watch me mix up all the sleeves :P)
January 21, 2013 23:42 (12 years ago)
Okay, all done and made it in pink, blue, and purple x__x although, one of the purple fight sleeves continues to not want to upload correctly for some reason
January 22, 2013 8:49 (12 years ago)
Hmm, could your perhaps resubmit the torso with a darker line art color for all the details? Because to me right now it looks like outlines with a bunch of blurriness.
February 16, 2013 4:32 (12 years ago)
I was just thinking i'd try my hand at submiting stuff too, if thats okay :3
Now, I placed the color variations on the same image, but clearly they wouldn't be in the actual submission.
February 16, 2013 5:42 (12 years ago)
Ahh so nice @A@ It took me forever to become an artist, but it probably won't take you very long. Make the outlines as dark as possile without it looking weird. The mods here love dark outlines!
February 16, 2013 9:32 (12 years ago)
The art style of the site is visible line art that matches all the other items.
It looks nice, Bubbly! Only the blue one would need darker line art. Could you show us some more samples or your work?
February 17, 2013 2:03 (12 years ago)
Sure! I can probably do something tonight, otherwise it'll have to wait to wednesday as I will be too busy at work :x but yah, let me fix up the blue one and wip up something else.
February 17, 2013 4:10 (12 years ago)
Okay so edited Flare tanktop;
and here's a Sweetheart prom dress design (in 3 colors ;)
February 17, 2013 11:03 (12 years ago)
Ooh, those folds are looking just great! The line art on the white one isn't dark enough though, dolls would blend right into the background of the site.
I think welcoming you as a site artist makes sense. Always keep the line art color thing in mind, though! As a guideline, if you turned the image to black/white, all lines should have about the same darkness as the doll base.
March 4, 2013 9:22 (12 years ago)
To BubblyConcoction: You're cool! All you need is to darken the lines of the white dress!
March 4, 2013 23:14 (12 years ago)
Those folds are insane. On the blue top, I can't tell the band is purple, until I picked up my laptop and brought it right to my face. So I would maybe play around with making it lighter to make it more obvious that it is purple.
March 12, 2013 5:53 (12 years ago)
The flare tanktop looks so kawaii~!! I could just wear the blue one when it's accepted! Though, the tanktop could use a little more darker outlines, it's the #1 concentration here. (I think? （*´▽｀*;）) But I'm sure all of them will be accepted, gogogo~!
March 21, 2013 9:17 (12 years ago)
Oh my goodness bubbly your stuff is awesome *o* folds are such a pain to do but you do them so well!!! I cant wait too see more of your stuff X3
April 10, 2013 14:45 (12 years ago)
*sighs* Long time no pixelate XD.
Here is a rough-sketch of a top...I need help on the sleeves *^*
Senbonzakura Rin Top...Senbkra R. Top for short XP:
Reference Pic
April 10, 2013 23:47 (12 years ago)
Very cute! ohmigoshhh I love it so much! I would say darker outlines with the grey and more shading on the sleeves. I want to wear it!
April 11, 2013 8:09 (12 years ago)
Well, it's just rough-sketch anyway...I just need help on the sleeves.
April 11, 2013 10:44 (12 years ago)
Re-shaded Senbkra Rin Top:
I feel there is something wrong with sleeves...Help me pwease
April 12, 2013 19:27 (12 years ago)
Uhh... Can I Like... Post What I Think I Need Help With ( Pixel Art Dat Imma Post ) And Like Actually Post Them?
And Can We Post ShortFish Stafs? lol
Oh!
@Tiffany_May:
That looks Pretty Good,Not That You Should Listen To Me Becuase I Have Been Here For Like A Month Only .-.
But I Belive (Sorry For Spelling) That It Looks Like On The Left Sleeve I Belive Has A Look When The Hole Were The Arm Goes, But Thats Just What I Think And Besides That I Dont Think There Is Nothing Bad, Nobody Will Notice The Shady Look ( What I Think, I Think You Wanted It XD ) And So Its Perfect, But Before Listing To Me You Should Get An Awnser From Someone Like Karen.
April 13, 2013 15:26 (12 years ago)
Karin*
April 14, 2013 22:27 (12 years ago)
Thanks for caring, Minecraft, but I usually don't get involved too much here because English isn't my native language and it takes me too much time to explain what people need to fix. So usually the mods would do that, but since they haven't yet...
@tiffany_may It's looks good to me. The right sleeve seems to have a bit of a lump on top. Maybe removing that will fix it. But, since you aren't a site artist yet, I would advice against making a sleeved top as your first item (see the sleeve tutorial if you need to ask why). Did you submit items before this?
Maybe I should upload Bubbly's stuff if she isn't coming back anytime soon.
But not bad. Just need darker outlines and more shading and that might work, well it depends to the moderators anyway
Puff-ish Dress (Pink, Purple, Softgree):
Still don't know what to name them:
here is a reference pic for it its supposed to be that long cause it a straight jacket xD
http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs20/f/2007/263/c/1/AIRGEAR__Agito_by_Michiko_GO.jpg
Ocean Bracelet-
Comment please
I made Angel Twintails into Black, Pink, And blonde colors. .u.
Did i make the outlines too dark? :x
Feedback pls ty. ^^
And the left pigtail is kinda off, you might want to take a second look.
Other than that, it is a brilliant first submission, keep up the good work!
So i decided to make shirts this time:
Heart T-Shirt. (Black, Pink, and White.)
Looks like i find making hair is easier than tops. =u=
Eyup.
Okay, i think i have improved most of them this time...
Sorry if i keep reposting too much. :c
Okay i'm not sure if i made it right but i think i fixed it:
Iv'e made additional skirts too.
I call it Pastel Skirt. (Pink and Blue colors.)
I'm not that good at making skirts because the pattern seems too confusing. :c
Be sure to check out the hair and sleeve tutorials to make your items compatible with arm poses and elf ears, too!
Being an site artist is just too hard for me
Yayyy~ :D
O wait do i still have to submit the items or are the items already submitted? .u.
I'm suddenly remembering why I decided I was never going to make a top... XD just...8 sleeves to go *dies*
Now, I placed the color variations on the same image, but clearly they wouldn't be in the actual submission.
It looks nice, Bubbly! Only the blue one would need darker line art. Could you show us some more samples or your work?
and here's a Sweetheart prom dress design (in 3 colors ;)
I think welcoming you as a site artist makes sense. Always keep the line art color thing in mind, though! As a guideline, if you turned the image to black/white, all lines should have about the same darkness as the doll base.
Here is a rough-sketch of a top...I need help on the sleeves *^*
Senbonzakura Rin Top...Senbkra R. Top for short XP:
Reference Pic
I feel there is something wrong with sleeves...Help me pwease
And Can We Post ShortFish Stafs? lol
Uploaded with ImageShack.us
Staf...
Stafs
Staffs
Lol Srry
@Tiffany_May:
That looks Pretty Good,Not That You Should Listen To Me Becuase I Have Been Here For Like A Month Only .-.
But I Belive (Sorry For Spelling) That It Looks Like On The Left Sleeve I Belive Has A Look When The Hole Were The Arm Goes, But Thats Just What I Think And Besides That I Dont Think There Is Nothing Bad, Nobody Will Notice The Shady Look ( What I Think, I Think You Wanted It XD ) And So Its Perfect, But Before Listing To Me You Should Get An Awnser From Someone Like Karen.
@tiffany_may It's looks good to me. The right sleeve seems to have a bit of a lump on top. Maybe removing that will fix it. But, since you aren't a site artist yet, I would advice against making a sleeved top as your first item (see the sleeve tutorial if you need to ask why). Did you submit items before this?
Maybe I should upload Bubbly's stuff if she isn't coming back anytime soon.